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J. M. Elliott's avatar

Daniel, this is brilliant. I was absolutely riveted the whole way through. And it's even more compelling to know that it's inspired by true events experienced by a relative of yours. Tight quarters on a crowded ship is bad enough, but when you factor in all the things that can go wrong, esp. in a storm, it's a nightmare. I grew up by the sea, but I took the ferry across the English Channel and it was very rough, to the point they told everyone to stay in their cabins to avoid getting hurt. The ferries are big enough to move cars, trucks, and buses, etc., but this ship was being thrown around on the waves like it was a raft. And that wasn't even a serious storm, so I can't even imagine what it's like to really be at the sea's mercy. Respect to anyone who makes their living that way.

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Adrian P Conway's avatar

Great atmospherics here, Daniel. Yes, some storms definitely shouldn’t be faced head on! And Job always good for a little mystery menace. The sound of the sirens. 👌🏻

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