Mount of the Pagan God
As we pitched our tents on the terraced slopes of the mount of the pagan god, only half remained of the men who came; and a mage with a golden rod. Round the camp were the graves of a hundred men of a tribe that had come before. And we said, “How queer that no bones appear but a kite’s on a tomb’s cracked floor.” We peered down the shafts and we dug through the dirt, but we found neither corpse nor clue. But the wizard bit a shard of a jar of nard And proclaimed that the witch spoke true: “For she said that the souls of the ones who die in their quest for the cloud-veiled peak Are the souls of the sought who’ll be found in time by the souls of the ones who seek.” So we broke up our camp by the light of dawn on the mount of the pagan god; And we pressed by degrees through the mist-clad trees, ever up thru the steeps we trod till we came to a pass ’neath the mountain’s peak now veiled in a black cloud wide. But our way was embarrassed by a hundred souls, who had sought what we sought and died. “We have found what we sought,” said the ghostly chief of that eerie elemental band. “They have died in their quest for the mountain’s peak. Hear their howls fill the haunted land!”
Eerie and lyrical at the same time. It was a joy to read.
Ooh, fantastic job with the musicality on this one. By the end of the poem it was a chant in my mind, which really adds to the themes here. Well done.