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I like your prose, and the AI illustrations.. wow.. so great! :) the colors.. the atmosphere here... love it....

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I’ve also subscribed to your Substack. Love the aesthetic of it!

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Oh thank you! :)

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Feedback is gasoline for obscure indie writers! I’m so grateful that you subscribed and left so many kind remarks. 😊 I only “discovered” AI art about a year ago, and it’s become something of an obsession.

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Just starting my journey with this story, Daniel, and really enjoyed the first chapter with the reveal at the end. Also, Evan is a fun character and his thoughts on French and Spanish along with the Australian “tour guide book” made me smile. I look forward to seeing where this one takes me 👍🏼

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Daniel, I’m over the moon that you started reading my novel and left those two wonderful comments. 😊

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I'm liking the style

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Thank you so much!!!

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This is too cool! Sooo many possibilities for what’s coming! Excited to keep reading 💃🏻🙌

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Definitely a different kind of story. Well written--as usual--and definitely something I want to follow along with.

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Thanks, Ben! The experience of writing this was so odd. It was the closes thing to a supernatural experience I’ve ever had while immersed in the process of writing.

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Glad I got to start this one from the beginning! Curious to see where it goes.

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Thank you for the feedback, Leigh!

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