I love how seamlessly you've integrated the unique facts of this world into alternate histories and lore. It really grounds the story in the familiar while heightening the sense of the extraordinary. Like where this is heading!
Well, my primary thought is that this 'trip' has taken on more contexts than my astral cortex can keep track of and I am afraid existent v. non-existent is going to resolve horribly but blissfully unaware.
This chapter felt like a bit more of an infodump in places, but I do like the alternate history aspects a lot. Will definitely keep reading.
Btw, I was a little confused that the unborn universe turned into a quarter at the end of the prologue but reverted at some point later? Maybe I missed something there.
I love how seamlessly you've integrated the unique facts of this world into alternate histories and lore. It really grounds the story in the familiar while heightening the sense of the extraordinary. Like where this is heading!
Oh! Thank you so much, Jacquie!!!
Well, my primary thought is that this 'trip' has taken on more contexts than my astral cortex can keep track of and I am afraid existent v. non-existent is going to resolve horribly but blissfully unaware.
😂 Thank you so much for at least reading the first few sections, Frank!
You are welcome, just too much for my tired old brain. But I loved your choices for illustrations art work!
This chapter felt like a bit more of an infodump in places, but I do like the alternate history aspects a lot. Will definitely keep reading.
Btw, I was a little confused that the unborn universe turned into a quarter at the end of the prologue but reverted at some point later? Maybe I missed something there.
Thank you for reading through it, Leigh!
The prologue says that, by the time the plane lands at LAX, it becomes a quarter. :)
Ah, I misread it then. My bad!