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Adrian P Conway's avatar

Oh man, this is pure Southern Gothic class. Exactly all those McCarthy/O’Connor feels. Consider my fedora doffed, Daniel. 🔥

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Oh thank you for the comment, Adrian! That was precisely what I was going for!

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Thomas D’Arcy O’Donnell's avatar

.. will return later this ayem.. eyes are fading - so stopped to Re-Stack at the ice machine ! .. clear as a desert day - the end result .. fresh eyes for this shooter & reader is what the writing clearly deserves !

🦎🏴‍☠️🎬

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you again for the kind comment and the restack! I know all about having to revisit a work with fresher eyes. I just woke up myself! 😀

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C. M. Setledge's avatar

Loved all the expectation disruptions. Had me on my toes. Vivid imagery.

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thanks again for leaving such a kind comment. 🙏

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Chris Deliso's avatar

Wow Daniel, this is a wild ride- heavy, comic, tragic, unexepcted, all seeming to expect a resolution that never comes. It's like a multiplicity of O. Henry, or the literary inversion of the old song 'El Paso' plus a bunch of other things. Very imaginative.

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you, Chris! The idea for this popped into my head last week when Cormac McCarthy passed away. His novel “Blood Meridian” hit me like a sack of brick when I read it in the ‘90s. Thought it’d be fun to write an homage blending a Flannery O’Conner-inspired character from the Christ-haunted South with a Tarantino-inspired “Grind house” setting.

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

*bricks

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