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A great spooky start. Looking forward in reading pt 2. 😀

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Thank you so much for the comment, Jason!!! 🙏

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You're welcome 😊

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Ooh, this one is right up my alley! How did I miss it?! Can't wait for Part 2 :-)

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It’s so awesome getting a thumbs-up on this story from an archaeologist! 😀 I finally posted the conclusion to the story today. Now I need to try to buckle down on the longterm projects. But thank you again so much!

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Great dialogue! And an ominous sense of foreboding at the end.. looking forward to Part 2!

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Thank you so much, SDG!!! 😀

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Daniel, I am enjoying the lurking chill that is apparent in this first part...looking forward to seeing how that resolves!

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Thank you so much, Frank! The germ of this story came to me during a two-week stay in Orvieto back in the day.

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Quality work my friend 👍🏼 looking forward to part two!

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Thank you so much! I especially appreciate this comment coming from a fellow retro horror enthusiast. 😊

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The whole time I was reading, I was thinking, 'Lovecraftian!'

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@Liz Zimmers Thank you so much for the restack!!!! 🙏

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