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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Really enjoyed that Daniel. Had a wonderfully unsettling rhythm to it where you thought you were getting to grips with the story and then it spun away out your grasp again

Excellently done 👍🏼

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you again, Daniel. Your feedback is so motivating.

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Winston Malone's avatar

I just it on the record that I’m not ignoring anybody. There. I said it. I’m safe... right?!

Love this story. You’ve deftly tackled several genres so far. Bravo 👏

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

I’m really enjoying Substack! Thank you for introducing me to it!

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J. M. Elliott's avatar

Oh man, this freaked me out more than you will ever know :-)

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you so much for the comment, Jacquie! 😊

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

That was super creepy!

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you for reading and commenting, Patricia!

And thank you for subscribing! 😊

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

Anytime. I keep finding more and more awesome writers here. You all need to stop. Or hit pause so I can work on my own writing. 😜

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Frank's avatar

Well it took long enough for someone to pay attention! Nothing like a good not so old fashioned UFO story!

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ben woestenburg's avatar

Wow that was intense. So good. I love the layers. Definitely signing up. I'm thinking, if that was just one story...

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment, Ben!

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Shaina Read's avatar

Love the ending. Such an interesting turn!

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you Shaina!

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