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J. M. Elliott's avatar

Brilliant chapter! My mind is churning with all of this new information. . .

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you, Jacquie. And I appreciate all of the advice about horsemanship. It’s going to help tremendously in the process of revising the previous chapters.

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Fantastic chapter, Daniel. From the supposed light hearted antics of Walter with the cat, the story turns to the darkness of Hermann’s birth and home, only to return back to the cat and the foreboding he feels after the story he’s just heard

Really brilliantly done 👍🏼

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

I fallen behind this week in a lot of things, but I’m embarrassed most about falling behind in expressing my appreciation for this comment. I’m so glad you remarked on the juxtaposition of the lighthearted beginning with the macabre conclusion to it. 😊 🐱

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Not at all, Daniel. I was on holiday last week so know all about falling behind 😁

I have the next chapter lined up and very much looking forward to reading it tonight 👍🏼

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Frank's avatar

Daniel, I'm fascinated by the new origin story for Hermann from a different perspective along with the coincidence of the cat appearing and attaching himself to Walter!

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you, Frank. The next few chapters are going to be replete with lore concerning the werewolf. Again, thank you for the encouraging comments.

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Jim Melvin's avatar

I agree with J.M. I loved this chapter!

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Thank you, Jim!!!

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