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Apr 3Liked by Daniel W. Davison

You make good use of the necessity for Hermann and Walter to make their way across the communities and boundaries of the time to find their way to safety. We learn a lot about the competing movement of people of these regions, and about the rationing of compassion for those deemed different, unclean or some other way tainted. And how easy for authority to ignore or even encourage mistreatment until confronted and called on the lack of care or concern for fellow human beings.

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Frank, thank you so much for the detailed comment. I’m so grateful that you remarked on the variety of the communities and the conflicting motivations of the characters. It means a lot. 🙏

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The great saga continues!

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Thank you again, Jim!!!! 🙏

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