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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

The level of description and detail here, Daniel, is second to none. You paint a vividly accurate picture of living and labouring in these workhouses and how death is just accepted as part of daily life with bodies being taken to the lime pits when they are of no more use. Brutal but just how things were.

Despite all his trials and what we know becomes of him, we still hold out hope for Hermann as he’s such a well drawn and sympathetic character who, even though he has faults, doesn’t deserve what is happening to him.

This is a magnificent piece of work that continues to captivate and intrigue in equal measure

Really well done, Daniel 👍🏼

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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Lots of great descriptive passages but my favourite is this one:

The man lowered his eyes and apologized. And when a vat of tar broke from its braces and crushed the man three days later, the Widow whispered over his corpse, “Glorious is the Name of Jesus.”

😅 She's a witch!

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