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The first time thru this one, I missed the timeline transitions - misjudged my fatigue I guess, and boy was I confused Daniel. Daylight worked much better! I am really enjoying the glimpses of humanity and sympathy coming from the witch / oracle. And for some reason the situation as fate decrees it reminds me of a quote from The Milagro Beanfield War by Coyote Angel "You're gonna need a big sacrifice here". Odd reference I know and a little flip perhaps, but no disrespect to the seriousness of the story is meant. I march on to your beat!

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I’m so grateful that SOMEONE is reading my witch story. You’re getting me eager to get back to writing it. I’m working on a new chapter for the werewolf story that I hope to post in a day or two, but I haven’t forgotten this tale and I really think I should discipline myself and finish it this year. I have a bad habit of getting sidetracked with other things--poems, stories about genies. 😂 I need to buckle down and finish these bigger projects before moving on to another one.

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My pleasure. Looking forward to the next episode of the werewolf story. The prologue episode really piqued my interest and it hasn't disappointed yet! And I've got a bit before I catch up with the witch. I say write the story as the muse directs or it might not be the story it should have been. And if something is itching to get out, do you really want to restrain it? Of course this is from a readers individual perspective...write on!

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