Daniel this one lies closer to the truth than we are comfortable with today, but tomorrow we may say what's taking so long. You've drawn out the pain that says I'm alive. Thanks
I love this rhyming couplet form, it is a true pleasure to read. And once again you remind us that life is fleeting and admonish us not to waste it. We’ll done!
Daniel this one lies closer to the truth than we are comfortable with today, but tomorrow we may say what's taking so long. You've drawn out the pain that says I'm alive. Thanks
I love this rhyming couplet form, it is a true pleasure to read. And once again you remind us that life is fleeting and admonish us not to waste it. We’ll done!
Thank you again, JayDub!!! ❤️
Beautiful! 💚
Daniel. This poem is absolute class. What a gorgeous final stanza. Really fine work. 🙌🏻
This is flattering praise, coming from a poet whose ear for the rhythmic turn and measured period always delights and charms.
Very well done, sitr. captures the current time, and the one you were inspired by.
Thank you, Chris!
Excellent. Very well composed. I enjoyed it.
Thank you so much, Ben!
And, of course, I sent it out with a typo in the first line that I had to correct. 😂