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Again, a lovely start, Daniel, with the men standing in the starlight sharing a cigarette and having light hearted banter. Then to the pub and more darkly fascinating tales. I love a story within a story within a story. All those lairs add up to make everything more believable and real. It’s the gift of a great storyteller when the characters go somewhere and I wish I was there with them, sharing their food and drink. It shows a world perfectly created and populated by people that seem as real as you and me

Brilliantly done 👍🏼

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Thank you so much, Daniel!

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Jul 7Liked by Daniel W. Davison

The story gets ever more fascinating! A large number of interconnected pieces of a closed system have been in motion for a long, long time it seems?

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Thank you so much, Frank! It’s turning into quite an ecosystem. The next few chapters are going to be exciting to write. I hope you enjoy them. As always, thank you so much for your meaningful and kind comments.

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